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      March 11, 2005

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      Hello all, the following is my first cg image put up for critique ever. I've gotten majority good feedback from this work and would like honest impressions, as well as possible room for improvement. I'm a senior at SCAD university with only two more quarters until I graduate, so areas that could be better would be great. Rendered in with FG and GI, modeled in Maya 6.01. No post Photoshop work. I will be using the Total Texure CDs, but what kind of textural quality do you see for the more repetitve surfaces?



      http://sfdm.ca.scad.edu/cmpa/student/gtaylo21/cmpaFinal/week9.htm thanks

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      [Edited on 11/3/05 by Sance21]

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      Nice work, real nice, but remember, that inperfection is perfection, I mean, what happens whit faces happen with architecture, there is allways some bricks in a different possition and some little details.

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      Really nice

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      great model! cant wait to see it with textures...
      i find what i like the most in architecture is the dirt and dust in the corners and as plechuga says, the little errors, imperfections, make it look more real.

      waiting to see more...

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